I finally attempted to do one of the revising one of my papers, and honestly it really was not that bad. I did the narrative that gave the advice. The way I revised it was I took out all the examples that weren't that dealed with me or what I have gone through. Also, I changed it so that it was directed towards someone I know. These two made my paper longer, like almost four hundred words longer. I find it almost comical, considering the first draft I did I totally B.S. it. Honestly, I could not get to seven hundred and fifty words to save my life. So I wish I would have known to direct it towards someone to make it easier on myself.